“Now re-edited” – the kiss of death or at least stinky breath.

About once a week during one of my day jobs I come across something interesting. I will see an ebook and in the beginning of the description it will say something like this:

Now re-edited!

Usually accompanied by a date when the supposed re-edit took place. And my first thought is what a shame and a waste. Here is someone who didn’t take the time, for whatever reason, when they first put their book up on Amazon to hire a professional editor. People complained because if a book is horribly edited they will complain and take stars off. The author listened to the complaints, which is a good thing, and got professional editing.

But here’s the problem.

Most of the people who looked at the book to try and decided if they want to buy it will never look back. Some of the new potential buyers will look at the comments and not pay attention to the “Now re-edited” part, and some will notice the update but will be turned off by the fact that the author didn’t put their best out there, to begin with.  That’s a whole bunch of lost audience in a very competitive field.

Your story may be great, but the fact is there are many great stories out there. The problem for readers isn’t finding a story they want to read, it is trying to find the best story and adding it to an already full TBR pile.

The added sad fact is you had already gotten people to read and comment on your work. That is an amazing step that a lot of writers would almost give a tooth for – but instead of glowing reviews you get, at best, a couple of stars and the explanation that you could use a good editor.

Lessons learned for some, warnings for others. I know editing can be expensive. But when you think about all the love, energy, and time you spent on your literary baby isn’t it worth it to scrimp and save for some good editing so you never have to re-release as re-edited?

What do you think?

Oh and have a good day!

Paula

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Don’t settle for “B List”

My family and I are binge-watching 30 Rock right now before it leaves Netflix on October 1.  It was always a show I wanted to watch, I love Tracy Morgan and Tina Fey and I know the show is great. But it was one of those shows we just never got around to.

Like most of you, we don’t have a lot of time so we have to prioritize what we spend that precious time on. At least when it comes to entertainment. And there are so many good choices, but we can’t watch them all. So there is what we call the “B list”. As in, if we had more time, the show would be something that we would like to watch, but right now there are so many more “A list” shows. It doesn’t mean that the “B list” shows aren’t good, they are.  But with time being a limited resource, we often don’t get a chance to get them. There are always more new content and shows out there to compete, and before you know it, you are binge watching because it is now or never.

Switching gears for a second, I promise this will make sense in the end. One of my best bosses gave me some great advice. I didn’t want to add going to school to my list of family and work obligations. As a software engineer, I was already doing the work. Except I wasn’t a software engineer yet, even though I was doing the work. I was angry because that wasn’t fair. But he was quite honest with me and told me that this is because people will always look for the excuse to hold against you, so you need to make sure that you don’t give them any excuses. The fact that I didn’t have my degree was held against me, even though I did excellent work. There were people who did excellent work too, and they had that degree.

If this sounds bitter or cynical, please don’t take it that way. I’m not saying it’s because people are trying to be mean. It is just how life works.

There are so many good titles out there. I am constantly adding books to my TR pile. There are even a lot of cheap or free books that are good because authors are using a free sample to get you to like their work. I wish I had time to read them all. But I don’t. So I look for the reason to hold against a book so I don’t waste my time on something I won’t enjoy as much as possible. Bad cover? pass. Bad editing? Pass. Lots of reviews that say bad editing? Pass. Majority of reviews that say the book is ok or that the characters need to be developed? Pass.

All those things have nothing to do with your story. It might be the most interesting tale ever, that would sing to my heart and make me want to read it over and over again. But I will never see it.

Which is why I keep posting articles about the importance of quality, and also what drives me nuts about my own writing. But why do this if we are not going to present our best selves to the world? Why give them an excuse to hold against us?

Have a great day!

Paula

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Quick Link: Driving Down the Price of Publishing

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This article hits home for me. I used to love creating quality ebooks for authors. Whatever you wanted I could do, things like drop caps, special inserted quotes, linked references all no problem. It is all just HTML/CSS to me. But I couldn’t compete with people who were offering to convert a whole book for $35. It didn’t matter that my quality was great and their quality wasn’t. On the other side, I do understand that indie authors are often under a tight budget and can’t spend a whole lot for a lot of different services. It is a lose – lose situation. Having less than stellar work out there makes the whole industry suffer. I don’t have any answers but  at Good E Reader shares her thoughts. What’s your opinion on this mess?

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Driving Down the Price of Publishing

Not too long ago, self-published authors were collectively admonished about the need to invest in their work. Hiring quality editors, proofreaders, cover designers, and formatters before attempting to sell a book was the constant mantra of industry experts. While some hapless writers continued to slap their Word docs up on Amazon and hope to snare a few readers, authors who took their careers seriously made the proper investments.

Around that time, a number of startups emerged, all billing themselves as eBay-like marketplaces for author services. Many of those startups have shuttered their virtual doors, while a few that produced meaningful connections between authors and publishing service providers have managed to thrive. But that hasn’t stopped newcomers to the game from trying to continually undercut the concept of paying for quality work.

“When I first began finding clients through online freelance postings, the self-publishing industry was a different place,” stated one editor who did not wished to be named. “Authors who had done their homework not only knew how much editing might cost, but they also knew enough to have sent their work to their writing group for critiques or even beta readers before declaring it ‘ready’ for editing. Now, I find new job postings almost daily requesting full edits of an 80,000-word book for $100.”

Read the full post on Good E Reader

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Give what you promise.

I just finished a book, one I won’t name because I don’t want to be mean. The problem is that the book was really good, at least for the first half.  You could tell where the writer either had a deadline or just gave up. I hate that.

It happens sometimes when I play an online game or even in some movies where they changed directors/programmers or hit a deadline and shoved the product out the door. The 1999 remake of the classic 1963 horror movie The Haunting is a perfect example. The original is very suspenseful and keeps you wondering what is going on and who you can trust. The remake started off really good, but if you have seen the 1999 version there is a very clear moment when you can tell they said f’this and decided to go with special effects gimmicks. Too sad, as it ruined the movie! Nothing against special effects, I love a good effects movie and sometimes really bad ones. The thing is to give what you promise.

We have a contract with the people who buy our writing or our services. With writing, you either need to keep the pace or increase the pace, especially because it is hard enough to get people to do nice things and write good reviews. But nothing motivates a reader to write a bad review faster than being disappointed because you didn’t deliver what you promised.

What about you? Have you found any stories or movies where you can tell when someone gave up? Share!

Have a great day!

Paula

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Quick Link: 6 Ways You Are Destroying Your Chances of Finding Readers

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Getting readers who hopefully love your story is the whole reason behind publishing your stories. Make sure you are not doing any of these six mistakes from at Books Go Social!

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6 Ways You Are Destroying Your Chances of Finding Readers

You’re a writer. You want to find readers. Traditional publishers are paying less and less, and they are taking fewer books these days.

So you decide to self-publish. You think it’s enough to put your book on the internet, that people should buy it, that you’ve done your job.

But have you destroyed your chances of your book finding readers, because of basic mistakes?

Sure, readers are still looking for high-quality stories and help from non fiction books, but these days they use the characteristics of how a book is presented as tells, indicators of the quality of storytelling and writing within.

If you can’t pay attention to these basic tells, they assume it’s unlikely you paid attention to the quality of the writing. And often they are right.

Are you destroying your chances of finding readers with these basic mistakes?

Read the full post on Books Go Social

Quick Links: Breathe! The Copyeditor Has Your Back

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One of the most important things you can do as an indie author is hire professionals to help you. According to author and freelance editor, Dario Ciriello one of the best choices is a good copyeditor. Read Dairo’s post at Janice Hardy’s Fiction University and see if you agree. 

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Breathe! The Copyeditor Has Your Back

By Dario Ciriello

Part of the Indie Author Series

One of the things a good copyeditor will do, beyond dealing with infelicities of grammar, syntax, style, composition, and general meaning, is cover your back. And I mean totally cover it.

In my experience, what most indie authors require is actually a combination of line, copy, and general editing1, not least because the cost of the several editing passes a big publishing house would do (general/developmental edit, line edit, copyedit) can add up to several thousand dollars, a prohibitive cost for the vast majority of indies.

When editing a manuscript for an indie client, the copyeditor is in a watchful mode, consciously noting and monitoring a broad swath of detail and information. The characters’ physical characteristics, the revealed details of their backstories, geographical locations, dates and times events take place, even character names—all these are prone to inconsistency and slippage over the course of a long work and revisions, and it’s the copyeditor’s job to spot these errors and fix them. But that’s just the beginning.

A copyeditor takes little for granted. If, say, I find a reference to a company called Datavision in the text, my first instinct is to wonder if it might not be styled DataVision, or Data Vision, and I’ll google it right away to see if a correction is needed. If I’m working on a science fiction novel and the author states that the universe is 13.8 billion years old, I’ll check that this figure is current and correct—science and tech are especially tricky, since our knowledge is increasing at such a rate that “facts” are constantly changing.