Dealing With Characters In A Series Of Novels

I’m preparing to write the 6th mystery in my Enos Hobson Leavenworth Mysteries Series; therefore, some of that which I will share with you is fresh in my mind. As a professional storyteller, I have always believed that the best stories are based around their characters. If we don’t consider characters, there is no basis for plot.

When I wrote my first book in my series, I considered who I would need to tell my story. I named them, assigned them roles, defined their appearances, defined their interactions, and considered their back stories to explain who they were and why. I developed a computer data base to keep all that straight, which became my Bible or ready character reference. That data base has become rather extensive now. I needed a system to determine how my characters should change or stay the same. The following is a method that seems to work well for me:

Character Development Spreadsheet

You can use a spread sheet or a table in a word processor to do this. Create three columns, 1 for the character’s name. 1 for the good things, & 1 for the bad things. This is not a Bible but a simple set of statements of where each character is at the start of the story and in what directions should he or she go in this story. It looks something like this:

Character:
Good  –   Negatives

Tommy (protagonist):
Proud of HS graduation.  –  Doesn’t know where money for college will come from.

Lucy (Girlfriend):
Happy she & Tommy graduated.   –    Going away to college. Needs to break up with Tommy.

Bill (Tommy’s Brother):
Looking forward to being star of football team.  –   Will become paralyzed by a car wreck soon.

Dad:
Plays favorites w/ Tommy.  –   Bill’s injury causes Dad to begin drinking heavily again, losing job.

Jimbo (Hoodlum):
Has been gone to reform school.  –   Gets out, gets drunk, crashes into Bill’s car to cause the injury.

Now, this is way too simplistic of an example, but it helps to develop character motivations and directions in the story. You can see the possibilities for conflict already. Is Tommy going to possibly be placed in a position of either ignoring the family problems, forget about college to help the family with Bill since Dad is no longer capable of doing so? Should he acquiesce to the breakup or try to go to Lucy’s school? What will happen to Jimbo. Should he become a major character who reforms and takes on responsibility to help Bill throughout the story? Or, should he be sent to jail for the rest of the story?

A lot depends on what has happened in previous stories and deciding if the characters should stay the same or should they grow and develop in different directions?  Once all this is decided, you can decide how they fit within the context of a set of plot points. In other words, where have they been, where are they right now, and where will they be going.

Outline

Now it’s time to list the chapter numbers and consider what happens in the story along the way to the end by considering the good and negative aspects of the characters. I write a few sentences about what should happen in each chapter right under the chapter number. Those stay in as a reference until I write each chapter, after which I delete them. This insures the characters go in the directions I felt they should be going. Now I realize this process may sound too much like a strait jacket to you seat-of-your-pants writers, but there is plenty of room in this structure for your muse to run wild. None of this has to be locked in concrete. There are times when I have changed the descriptive sentences under a chapter number to accommodate a creative idea I got that would change everything. The methodology is meant as a means to energize creativity while keeping the story on track with good reasons for all the characters doing what they do.

Blending Techniques

I do the spread sheets and then I use Contour software (designed for screenplays, but I’ve found it works for novels as well) which asks pertinent questions that cause one to create a meaningful story framework. Once I’m done with that, I combine the considerations of both approaches to create the chapter outlines.

 

This is a reprint from Bob Spear‘s Book Trends blog.

NANOWRIMO DAY 11: Feeling the Burn? Writers Tools (Scrivener!) and Toys (Pandora!) That May Save the Day

This post, by Andrea King Collier, originally appeared on SheWrites on 11/11/10. Hopefully it’ll offer some help and support to Publetarians who are also NaNoWriMo-ers at the halfway point.

As Andrea Collier, our NaNoWriMo correspondent, nails the near-half-way mark (20,400 words), she has an epiphany about her protagonist and turns to Scrivener, Pandora, a digital voice recorder, and…oh yes, old-fashioned notebook and pen.

DAY 11: Oh She Writers and SheWriMos, all the cake is gone. Even though I am clipping away at my 50,000 words, I feel like I’m hitting the wall. Time for writer’s toys and distractions.

Okay, I should not be feeling like this until next week, which is the half-way point. But I’m getting ADD. I’m still laying down words at the rate I promised myself– steady and messy. But SheWriters, I am back to wondering what I was thinking. I am beyond the put butt in chair phase. The glow of focus is blurry. And sometimes I embed stupid stuff in my work just to keep me interested. Like today, I added a section called “It was a dark and stormy night.” I listed all the things that could happen on a dark and stormy night. This was not good. It was just a diversion. I notice that I play computer Scrabble more. I curse at the computer more. And the critic is really getting to me. I curse at her too. (But as fellow She Writer Tayari Jones points out, criticism can hurt, but it’s essential!)

I am now at 20,400 words. Can you believe it? So technically I am almost at the halfway mark. Consistency has its virtues. Consistency is like the NY City Marathon. It’s worse than that. It is like running the marathon blindfolded, with a drunk seeing-eye dog. I don’t have a clue where I’m going—except that I’m going to 50,000 words or bust. I have gained three stressed out pounds. And I split open my toenail after kicking the scale.

So let’s talk about writer’s toys and tools. It’s a topic of discussion over at GalleyCat, and I know I can no longer be singularly focused. I eventually have to find ways to trick myself into writing my NaNoWriMo words. I have had a hard time posting anything on their site. So that is not on my list of fun diversions this week. But I did get a terrific, inspirational pep talk from the fabulous writer Aimee Bender. Her words will knock out any writer, NaNoWriMo or not.

The toys and tools:
 

Read the rest of the post on SheWrites.

Anatomy Of A Bestselling Novel

This post, by Kristen Lamb, originally appeared on her blog on 11/1/10.

Want a way to stand out from all the other writers clamoring to get an agent’s attention? Want to be a best-selling author with stories that endure the tests of time? Learn all you can about the craft, particularly novel structure.

Structure is one of those boring topics like finance or taxes. It isn’t nearly as glamorous as creating characters or reading about ways to unleash our creative energy. Structure is probably one of the most overlooked topics, and yet it is the most critical. Why? Because structure is for the reader. The farther an author deviates from structure, the less likely the story will connect to a reader. Agents know this and editors know this and, since they are in the business of selling books to readers, structure becomes vital.

Story that connects to reader = lots of books sold

Story that deviates so far from structure that readers get confused or bored = slush pile

As an editor, I can tell in five minutes if an author understands narrative structure. Seriously.

Oh and I can hear the moaning and great gnashing of teeth. Trust me, I hear ya. Structure can be tough to wrap your mind around and, to be blunt, most aspiring writers don’t understand it. They rely on wordsmithery and hope they can bluff past people like me with their glorious prose. Yeah, no. Prose isn’t plot. You have to understand plot. That’s why I am going to make this upcoming series simple easy and best of all FUN.

Learning narrative structure ranks right up there with…memorizing the Periodic Table. Remember those days? Ah, high school chemistry. The funny thing about chemistry is that if you didn’t grasp the Periodic Table, then you simply would never do well in chemistry. Everything beyond Chapter One hinged on this fundamental step—understanding the Periodic Table.

Location, location, location.

See, the elements were a lot like the groups at high school. They all had their own parts of the “lunch room.” Metals on one part of the table, then the non-metals. Metals liked to date non-metals. They called themselves “The Ionics” thinking it sounded cool. Metals never dated other metals, but non-metals did date other non-metals. They were called “The Covalents.”  And then you had the neutral gases. The nerds of the Periodic Table. No one hung out with them. Ever. Okay, other nerds, but that was it. Period.

All silliness aside, if you didn’t understand what element would likely hang out where and in what company, the rest of chemistry might as well have been Sanskrit….like it was for me the first three times I failed it.

Novel structure can be very similar. Back in September we talked a lot about novel beginnings (pun, of course, intended). Normal world has a clear purpose, just like all the other components of the narrative structure. Today we are going to go back to basics, before we ever worry about things like Aristotelian structure, turning points, rising action, and darkest moments.

 

Read the rest of the post on Kristen Lamb’s blog.

20 Creative Ways to Overcome Writer’s Block

This post originally appeared on the Web Design Schools Guide site and is reprinted here in its entirety with the site’s permission.

Writer’s block is the bane of anyone and everyone who writes. You’ll be cruising through a story, your words are flowing nicely, until suddenly you’ve hit the brakes and can’t restart the engine. Most of us try to work through the road block, endlessly searching for inspiration, but sometimes you just can’t produce anything worthwhile. Instead of cursing the writing gods or pressing the delete button, take your hands off the keyboard, take a deep breath and consider trying one of these 20 creative ways to overcome writer’s block:

  1. Relaxation Techniques: Practicing relaxation techniques can be extremely effective for overcoming writer’s block. Relaxation techniques can improve concentration, boost confidence and increase blood flow to major muscles. Taking a break from your writing to do a relaxation exercise will get your blood flowing and your brain back on track.
     
  2. Attend a Writer’s Workshop: Attending a writer’s workshop is a surefire way to inspire you and overcome writer’s block. You may not be able to attend a workshop at the onset of writer’s block, but you can take the lessons and tricks you learned that will help you rise above writer’s block.
     
  3. Jot in a Journal: It’s a good idea to carry a journal with you whenever you’re out and not sitting in front of a computer, so you can jot down story ideas, character names, conflicts or anything that comes to mind. Then, when you’re stuck on something, you can refer to the journal for ideas or inspiration.
     
  4. Sleep on It: You may have exhausted your brain of ideas for one day, so it might be in your best interest to sleep it off. More than likely, you’ll wake up refreshed and ready to tackle your story the next day.
     
  5. Read Inspirational Quotes: Sometimes the only way to get inspired is to read other’s inspiring words. Try reading inspirational quotes that will rejuvenate your spirit and get you back to writing.
     
  6. Go for a Walk or Jog: Sometimes the only way to get back on track with your writing is to get moving. Go for a walk or jog to clear your mind and take in your surroundings. You never know what observation could be applied to your story and overcome your writer’s block.
     
  7. Do Something Mindless: When you’re experiencing writer’s block, it’s best to step away from the computer and calm your brain down. You may find it beneficial to do something mindless like watch television, a movie or read a magazine before you return to writing.
     
  8. Switch to Another Project: When you’re experiencing writer’s block, take a breather from what you’re working on and switch to another project. That way you’re still being productive and exercising your brain, before returning to your original project.
     
  9. Writing Exercises: When you’ve fallen into a writing slump, try a writing exercise that will help you brainstorm and keep your mind fresh. Some writing exercises provide a prompt that narrows your focus, while others are free of constraints.
     
  10. Stream-of-Consciousness Writing: Stream-of-consciousness writing allows you to use interior monologue to put your thoughts on paper. This kind of writing is raw and often difficult to follow, but it can clear your mind of nonsense and help you get back on track.
     
  11. Change Sceneries: Your desk and white walls will get pretty old after a while. Venture away from your normal workspace and change sceneries when you are struggling with writer’s block. Even changing rooms within your house or going to your backyard will offer enough variety to get you out of your funk.
     
  12. Play a Game: Playing games is a nice break from the frustrations of writer’s block, but it can also help you overcome the challenges in your writing. Games of all kinds can have a positive effect on your creativity and problem-solving skills.
     
  13. Make an Inspiration Board: An inspiration board is an effective tool for overcoming writer’s block. This board is a collection of visual ideas like newspaper clippings, magazine pictures, photographs and just about anything that can be used to inspire you when you’re in a major slump.
     
  14. Switch Art Forms: Sometimes you’ve got to step out of your art form and into another to start fresh. When you have writer’s block, you may want to shift your efforts toward another art form, such as playing a musical instrument, painting, drawing, dancing or photography. Whatever experience you choose, it will surely boost creativity and freshen your writing.
     
  15. Unplug the Internet: Unplugging the Internet is one solution to overcoming writer’s block. This will put a temporary end to the countless distractions that circulate the web, like Facebook, Twitter and even e-mail. Getting back to the basics is refreshing and can make a huge difference in your overall productivity.
     
  16. Read Blogs: One way to overcome writer’s block is to read the work of others. Blogs are fun to read and they touch on so many different topics that are bound to give you an idea or two.
     
  17. Cut out the Rules: Writing without rules is especially helpful for those who have writer’s block. This approach allows you to write without inhibitions and let the words flow without interruption. In order to practice this difficult exercise, you’ll have to ignore spelling, grammar, formatting and context rules and just write. You can always edit later.
     
  18. Listen to Music: Music can be extremely inspirational and relaxing at the same time. Listening to the right song can spark a new idea, help you solve a problem and collect your thoughts, which may be all you need to get over a bad case of writer’s block.
     
  19. Talk and Ask Questions: When all else fails, spark up a conversation with others to get past your writer’s block. Better yet, ask fellow writers what they think of your topic or how can you expand on a particular part of your story. You’d be surprised by the amount of great ideas that come from the people you interact with everyday.
     
  20. Follow the News: Whether you pick up a newspaper, turn on the local news channel or read a story online, the news is filled with real, raw stories that can be incredibly inspiring. News articles are also great references for expanding your vocabulary.

 

 

I Didn't Plan This Post

I didn’t think that much about this post at first. When the title came to me it was after a few minutes of sitting here, realizing that I really didn’t have a plan for this week’s post. I had this vague notion that I wanted to write something here before the work week was over, but I really didn’t have a specific idea I wanted to develop into an article. Then I realized that the subject of planning itself – especially in the context of writing – was a worthy subject. It’s one that I do address from time to time, but I will admit that I’m not the best planner.

You see, I’m not a planner by nature at all. I struggle daily with the concepts of planning, scheduling, and setting goals. What articles I write about it only serve to heighten my awareness of this need to have a plan. Clearly, I am not alone in this. You know very well what it’s like, those of you who also don’t find that planning is a natural tendency. You struggle with meshing your chaotic thoughts into coherent sentences just as much as I do.

The Plan Itself

Plans are a tool of structure and order. They also have the added bonus of helping you get things done more efficiently and with fewer problems in the long-run. For the writer, the plan can sometimes get mixed up with certain attitudes about outlining, but I’m sure most of you long ago read in one of those many writer’s guides that we don’t necessary need to follow some stringent outline structure like we used when we were high school. I wouldn’t dare suggest that for any of you. I certainly have not desire to codify my thoughts about how a piece of writing is put together using letters, Roman numerals, and the like.  Plans are pretty flexible things when you think about it. They can be conceived in an endless variety forms and are used to accomplish all manner of things in our lives – every single day.

When a plan is conceived and brought to fruition you have to smile at the pleasure the one who pulled it off must be feeling.  Think about it this way. Say if you’re working on a book and you spend some time at the beginning to jot down some notes about what you want to happen; it doesn’t have to be static. You’re merely giving yourself some rough guides going forward. Now, picture the finish line folks. You’ve used that plan to finish your story in a more sensible manner. You no longer have to wait for so-call inspiration to cast you headlong into a story with no sense of the purpose or the goal of the narrative. That little plan is your insider’s guide. You know where it’s all headed. 

 

As For Me

The point where the rubber meets to road for me is actually learning what is involved in conceiving a good plan. Depending on the subject or project you have before you, the plan may be rather small – a few points jotted down on paper to tell you what needs to be done in order complete the task. That is really enough sometimes. Now, the more complex your gig is, the more you’ll have to think about it. Nobody wants to get bogged down in ill-conceived ideas. (I know I don’t.) That sort of cinches it for me, really. I need a plan going forward. In fact, there is a need for more than one plan. I have lots of things going on at once so I need a cohesive strategy to make it all fit.

In the end, all I have to say is, "I love when a plan comes together."

 

This is a reprint from Shaun C. Kilgore‘s blog.

Ebooks & Ebook Readers

From here it looks like the world is inexorably headed to a time when almost all reading will be of digital text, either alone or in mixed media products. As the numbers come in, ebooks sell more and more compared to other editions. Recently Jeff Bezos of Amazon.com announced that ebooks for his Kindle platform sold more copies than hardcover books in the Amazon store.

Many industry commentators have been predicting a move to ebooks and digital readers for some time, but the tide may be turning under our feet. Changes across the publishing industry are massive and affected by both technology and the recessionary environment of the last couple of years.

Every week we hear announcements of authors “going digital” of publishers abandoning print, and you know that change is afoot.

Self-Publishing in the Digital Age

While book lovers may mourn the printed book as the main unit of text consumption, the growth of ebooks has been a real boon to self-publishers.

Online marketing through social media networks has allowed a whole class of authors to go directly for a readership platform. Their entrepreneurial instincts and willingness to take risks have paid of well for some pioneers.

The playing field has been leveled to an unprecedented degree. Like early bloggers who have built massive traffic online, authors of all kinds of books have the opportunity to find their own audiences, and ebooks just make that whole effort more direct and more efficient.

But it’s still early days on the digital frontier. All self-publishers need to make allowances for their books to be distributed in every format in which readers would like to buy them. Planning for digitization in the various formats required by different equipment is quickly becoming an accepted part of the workflow.

Here are some articles on the “magical” new hardware from Apple that’s changed the landscape for ebook readers and tablet computers alike.

Apple iPad

iPad’s ePub: The “Book” of the Future?
iPad, iBookstore, iBooks, iAnticipation
Apple iPad: The Future of the Book Starts Now
Apple iPad: E-Book Reading, Kindle-Killing, Business-Saving Product of the Century?

There are lots of other ebook formats and readers on the market, and you’ll want to find out more about Kindle, Nook, Sony Reader and all the others we’ll soon see for sale.

Amazon Kindle

Amazon Kindle vs. Apple iPad: Could Chris Brogan Be Wrong?
Kindle for Mac: The Calm Before the Storm

General eBook and eBook Reader

How Apple’s App Store is Changing Bookselling
A Look at the Nook: No, It’s Not a Book!

Luckily for self-publishers, there is more information and automation coming to the creation of ePub files. Although as designers we might chaff at the restrictions on typography, fonts, and overall design, we can do a creditable job with the tools we have now.

Creating EPUB Files

Liz Castro: EPUB Straight to the Point
Storyist Software Offers Easy ePub to Self-Publishers
Managing Your eBook Library with Calibre

You can bet that this is the most dynamic area in publishing and self-publishing right now, and will continue to be crucial for publishers going forward. You can expect to see a lot of coverage on the design, conversion, creation and marketing of ebooks as the months unfold.

 

This is a reprint from Joel Friedlander‘s The Book Designer.

Judging The Quality Of Your Writing

In the previous post I said there’s no relationship between writing quality and publication. Book deals are made for economic reasons, not because great writing makes the world a better place. If a prospective but marketable writer stinks, the industry will hire a ghostwriter, treating content as just another part of the manufacturing process.

I said the same thing in a recent spat with Jane Smith. I said the same thing when Sarah Palin’s book was announced. I’ve pointed to, and will continue to point to, incidents where publishers have failed to meet the same standards they routinely accuse unpublished and independent authors of failing to meet.

I understand why publishing wants to promote itself as the sole judge of quality and merit. Such status equates to power, and power in the marketplace equals money. But publishing’s credibility is so completely corrupted by its own actions that nobody in their right mind would take the sole word of a publisher, agent or editor when it comes to judging writing on the basis of quality, any more than one would try a case if the presiding judge had a vested interest in the outcome.  

On Being Blind
There’s no disputing that most people who attempt to write — and particularly those who attempt fiction — falter in their initial attempts. Complicating the problem is that almost everyone who tries to write is truly blind to the quality of their output. (The only people who aren’t tend to be egomaniacs, but you can’t reason with them so we don’t have to worry about them here.)

I talked about the problem of blindness in a series of posts on writing workshops. While ego is always present in a workshop, most workshops have no profit motive associated with them. If the workshop is in a scholastic setting, the teacher gets paid whether the students are good or not. Contrast this with the marketplace, where agents, editors and publishers rely on the output of writers for their mortgage payments. In a workshop there’s no motivation to lie and no motivation to pass over good writing simply because it won’t sell. The emphasis is always on quality and effectiveness, not marketability.

On Being Free
The collective relief that I and other writers feel — including people who have been working professionally in other mediums for years — comes from the fact that the publishing industry can no longer control access to readers. From a quality standpoint, however, the ability of anyone to publish anything (on the web or in print) means there is no longer even a self-interested bureaucracy insisting on a given level of authorial competence. People who can’t write a convincing line of dialogue or an emotionally moving sentence have the same access as people who can carry a literary tune. Because the industry’s gatekeeping apparatus was the only game in town, it did function as a qualitative filter, occasionally plucking a wonder from the constant influx of muck, while generally rejecting people who didn’t have the chops — even as it also rejected people with amazing but non-commercial chops, or points of view that wouldn’t sell to mainstream audiences.

The question now is, who gets to decide? Who sits in judgment of writers who want to be judged today?

Sitting in Judgment
The answer is both simple and complex. It’s simple in that no writer should be asking the publishing industry to judge the quality of their writing. If you do not know how good your writing is, do not send it to an agent or editor or publisher. Their job is to judge marketability, not quality.

The question is complex in that every writer’s needs, abilities and goals are different. If a writer is writing for personal enjoyment, then their writing needs to be judged on that basis. If a writer is trying to tell a story that others will enjoy, or communicate information to others, then that’s the test: is the writing enjoyable and informative; is it powerful and clear or muddy and confusing? Similar questions should also be asked before a writer tries to take a work to market, and that includes the new online, world-wide marketplace we call the internet.

If you’re not ninety-nine percent sure that what you wrote is good, either as a result of long experience or direct confirmation from trusted readers, then the last thing you should be doing is banging on an industry door and demanding a response, let alone publication. To the extent that this advice necessarily decreases the workload of editors, agents and publishers — who are constantly inundated with bad writing — that is a byproduct of my intent. My desire is not to make life easier for people in publishing, but to make sure that no writer allows the publishing industry to invalidate the quality of their work when industry judgments are almost always made based on marketing criteria (assuming a minimum level of literary competence).

Taking Responsibility
If you want to set the literary bar as high as you can, go for it. If you want to have your book published by a mainstream publisher, I cheer you on. But before you make that attempt you need to know — not just think, but know – that your book is good. And if you’re an honest and humble writer, having as much confidence as possible in the quality of your work before you send it out should be critical to you.

Unless your spouse or relative is a writer in their own right, and unless you have incredible trust between you, asking people close to you to validate your work is not a good idea. Beyond the fact that family members probably won’t have the reading or writing chops to comment with authority, the main reason you shouldn’t ask people close to you to judge your work is that they love you and don’t want to crush your dreams. If you live in the same house, the prospect of blow-back or unending anguish will almost certainly corrupt the feedback process.

If you can find or start a workshop, that’s a good option. If you already have trusted readers, listen to them and ask them to be honest about whether your work is ready. If you are all alone on an island with broadband, reach out on the web and ask friends or peers for feedback. If you work in a large company, find the marketing department and ask if anyone is a writer along your own lines. Wherever you can, seek out readers who are interested in providing feedback — as long as no money changes hands.

Take on the responsibility of judgment yourself, but don’t do the judging. Get a second opinion, and a third, and a fourth. Make it impossible for the industry to reject you on any basis other than marketing.

 

This is a reprint from Mark Barrett‘s Ditchwalk.

Will Juvie Publishing Remain A Book Business As Tablets Take Over?

This article, by Mike Shatzkin, originally appeared on the Idea Logical Company blog.

This post will discuss a realization I had even before this morning’s news about the developing e-products scene. I’ve always been a skeptic about enhanced ebooks, based on seeing my hunch that they wouldn’t work come true 15 years ago with CD-Roms. But it is increasingly obvious that CD-Rom type thinking will work very well for kids’ books. In fact, I’m beginning to think that enhanced ebook or app-type delivery could overwhelm books as a container-of-choice in a pretty short time. Single digit years.

The reasons that I’m skeptical about enhanced (or enriched, a recent term I’ve heard that might be better) ebooks is because most adult books are written as narrative reading experiences not intended to be interrupted and now being read by people who value the immersive experience. (Not all. But most of the kind we think of as bestsellers or literature.) My guess is that it is going to be hard to shift many of the hours of consumption now devoted to immersive reading to something quite different. And I see that as a qualitatively different challenge than moving immersive reading itself from one delivery mechanism (paper) to another (screens.)

The reason that kids’ material didn’t survive the CD-Rom period 15 years ago was the complexity of the delivery mechanism. You had to be at a computer, which usually meant a desktop computer. You had to load the CD-Rom, which on most computers (because few then were Macs) required additional navigation before they would play. These products just weren’t really accessible to kids, even if the programming they contained was designed for them.

But those reservations just don’t hold for kids’ “books” (if that’s what you call them) migrated to the iPad, a smartphone or, now, the NOOKcolor (which, I think, is how its owners would like us to spell it.)

The degree to which you can immerse yourself in a book is directly proportional to the fluency with which you read. That means that the younger you are, the more likely you are to accept the interrupted reading experience.

 

Read the rest of the article on the Idea Logical Company blog.

Achieving Your Dream Of Writing And Publishing A Book…At Any Age

Writing a book is a dream that many people talk about but few actually achieve. Some figures suggest that 80% of people want to write a book, and even though we read of the thousands of books published every month, many people die with their book inside them.

One of the driving passions behind this website is to help people get their book into the world, by whatever means they can. That’s why I share everything to save you time, effort and heartache on the way. It is amazingly rewarding when I hear the stories of how this information has actually resulted in a newly published book!

A few weeks ago, I received a wonderful email from Jeanne Scott and I wanted to share some of it with you as an inspirational story that you can write and publish your book at any age.

Jeanne is now 81 and has just published “Out of Order” on Amazon.com through Createspace. She has also created a website, has YouTube videos of her media interviews and is also on twitter which just proves that digital publishing and online marketing can be used by anybody who wants to share their message.

“Two years ago, I completed my 40 year effort – describing the life of a “misfit” nun – only to find myself facing the economic depletion of big publishers’ willingness to consider new writers as potentially profitable risks. On top of that, I came down with Shingles on my 80th birthday! Moan and Groan! All this effort down the drain? Lo and behold, a former student of mine, also an aspiring writer, e-mailed your masterpiece, Author2.0 Blueprint, to me!…  I was inspired to apply your recommendations at a snail’s pace. Thank you for being such a staunch, dedicated resource for struggling writers! I must express my sincere appreciation for your encouragement! Not only have I persevered to the point of self-publishing on Amazon.com through working with CreateSpace; but also obtaining some excellent assistance in creating a website, thegreennun.org to share concepts re the “conventizing of women” as a means of subjugating them to second class citizenship socially, economically, etc.”

I hope this inspires some of you who just need that extra push to get your book out there. It’s almost time to start goal setting for 2011 and with print on demand technology, there is no excuse to keep that book inside any longer.

Remember that not everyone writes and publishes a book in order to get a NY Times bestseller. Some people just want to get their story out there. For others, it is a life goal that is entirely achievable now. Please don’t let anyone hold you back!

Congratulations Jeanne! You are an inspiration.

You can buy “Out of Order” at Amazon for just $14.95

 

In the below interview, Jeanne is interviewed about her former life as a nun.

This is a reprint from Joanna Penn‘s The Creative Penn.

Antellus reissues NAGRASANTI Illustrated Vampire Anthology

Antellus – Science Fantasy Adventure and Nonfiction Books and Ebooks
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Antellus reissues NAGRASANTI Illustrated Vampire Anthology

Antellus, a private independent publisher of science fantasy adventure and nonfiction books and ebooks, has republished NAGRASANTI, an illustrated anthology of vampire short stories by author Theresa M. Moore through a second supplier, with an expanded title and revised cover.

In the wake of new publishing options offered by CreateSpace, NAGRASANTI, the third installment in the SF/vampire fusion series Children of The Dragon by Theresa M. Moore, will be made available through both CreateSpace and Amazon in the coming weeks. The anthology is a large paperback volume at 8.5" x 11" and 342 pages, with a list price of $22.95.

"We had been waiting for this for a long time," Antellus owner and CEO Theresa M. Moore said. "The limitations of the publishing options for trim sizes offered by CreateSpace prevented us from being able to present the book in its original size to Amazon for some time. This is a great opportunity for us and we look forward to making this project searchable for Amazon shoppers."

The print version of the anthology, and its ebook version, are already available for purchase from the Antellus detail page and on Amazon as a Kindle edition.

The Children of The Dragon series of SF/vampire books is the epic chronicle of the Xosan, living vampires from the planet Antellus who were once human but were transformed by a dragon’s blood. They are stories of science fiction, fact and fantasy, myth and history, romance, tragedy and triumph; linked together by the theme of the vampire as hero.

About the author: Theresa M. Moore has many years of experience as a writer and  fantasy artist. Her work reflects a love for imaginative and speculative fiction, ever with the mission to educate as well as entertain. She has been a member of The Count Dracula Society, The Los Angeles Science Fantasy Society, the Cartoon Fantasy Organization and various other genre associations, and continues to maintain an interest in science fiction, fantasy, adventure and anime. In addition to works of fiction, Moore also has a keen interest in history, mythology and science, as well as a skeptical interest in the workings of pseudoscience.

Blocking Your Access

This post, by Zoe Winters, originally appeared on Indiereader on 11/1/10.

I experienced my first bit of genuine discrimination as an indie author recently. I’m not talking about some silly jerk on the Internet heckling me. Those people are a dime a dozen. I’m talking about someone who is supposed to be running a business, determining that my money isn’t good enough for them because of how I published.

So why is this on the reader blog and not on the author blog? Because readers often go along fairly oblivious to much of what goes on behind-the-scenes in the publishing war zone.

I don’t know how it is in other genres, but I can talk about mine as just one example. The romance genre has a lot of backbiting and drama to the point where I really don’t like associating with the community as a whole. It’s part of why I’ll never join RWA (Romance Writers of America).

While I do know some awesome ladies who write romance, both indie and traditionally published, as a whole, I avoid the community because it’s too much meanness in one cesspool for me, thanks.

Romance is one of the most discriminated-against genres. Many in the general public snub their nose at it. I remember when I was in 8th grade, my literature teacher encouraged my writing dream and told me about one of her friends who wrote romance novels.

And in the 8th grade, I thought to myself: “Romance? Those aren’t real books!” Oh God, please let me have just thought it, and not said it out loud. Even as a kid, I didn’t have a very big filter. Pretty much whatever floated through my brain, flowed out my mouth. So I might have actually said it.

This is just to give you some idea of how deep this romance stigma runs. I was a dinky little 8th grader with an opinion about what constituted a “real book”. Readers who don’t care if a book is self-published, will often still snub romance published in any way. So in some ways the stigmas with regards to romance and with regards to self-publishing are about six of one, half a dozen of the other.

 

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Writer's Digest Q&A With April L. Hamilton

This interview originally appeared on the Writer’s Digest site on 11/2/2010.

What piece of advice have you received over the course of your career that has had the biggest impact on your success?
 
This is a difficult question to answer, since my career has taken some unexpected twists and turns. I don’t think I’ve received career advice pertaining to writing or publishing from any specific person along the way, but there are three guiding principles I’ve tended to follow. The first is, “Nobody knows anything,” which is a quote from William Goldman.

This interview originally appeared on the Writer’s Digest site on 11/2/2010.

What piece of advice have you received over the course of your career that has had the biggest impact on your success?
 
This is a difficult question to answer, since my career has taken some unexpected twists and turns. I don’t think I’ve received career advice pertaining to writing or publishing from any specific person along the way, but there are three guiding principles I’ve tended to follow. The first is, “Nobody knows anything,” which is a quote from William Goldman.

 
The second is that there’s nothing mysterious or sacred about publishing. Publishing is a business, nothing more or less. The last is that most of the time, what seems like luck is actually just preparation meeting opportunity. 
 
I’ve taken the Goldman quote to mean there’s no fixed blueprint for success in any endeavor; at some point you have to stop trying to figure out the secret handshake and just focus on doing the best work you possibly can so you’ll be ready when a door opens for you at last.
 
Recognizing publishing for the business it is reveals the fact that signing with a publisher is simply a business partnership, there’s nothing magical about it. If a publisher chooses not to partner with this or that writer, it doesn’t necessarily mean the writer’s work has no merit or commercial potential. All it means is that the partnership didn’t look like a profitable one to that specific publisher at that specific time.

It’s easy to get caught up in emotions when things don’t work out as you’d hoped, but emotion has nothing to do with it. There are no white hats and black hats here, just businesspeople making business decisions.

 
What message do you find yourself repeating over and over to writers?
 
Forget the so-called “rules” of writing. Sometimes prologues work, sometimes they don’t. Sometimes shifts in POV work, sometimes they don’t. Sometimes an adverb really is the best word choice. If you must have rules, I’d say these are the only two you need:
 
1. If it weakens, or adds nothing to the work, change it.
2. If it strengthens the work, leave it alone.
 
 
What’s the worst kind of mistake that new writers, freelancers, or book authors can make?
 
I hate to repeat myself so soon, but I have to go back to treating publishing like a business: most aspiring authors don’t. If you intend to approach an agent or trade publisher, you need to be able to make a compelling case for why they should take a risk on you and your book, why you and your book are likely to be profitable.
 
If you’re going to self-publish for profit, you need to go into it expecting to run a small business because that’s exactly what you’ll be doing. And if you’re going to try and support yourself through freelance gigs, again, you must accept that you’re running a business and operate accordingly: maintain records, keep an eye on the competition, track income and expenses, and so on.

 

Read the rest of the interview on Writer’s Digest.

Reassemble Or Be Damned (or how humpty-dumpty publishing should be put back together again)

Last week PC World ran an online article entitled, Why Book Publishing Needs the Silicon Valley Way, by Mike Elgan. There is a great deal in this article and Elgan’s basic premise is that the current model of publishing—by which he means traditional publishing houses—is broken and it is now time for publishers to look to Silicon Valley and adopt their approach and apply it to the publishing industry.

 

“The reason is that the industry is clinging to an obsolete business model. And the whole process of discovering new talent is broken beyond repair.


Like the book publishing industry, Silicon Valley is in the business of cultivating, nurturing and funding intellectual property. The difference is that the Silicon Valley approach works, and the book publishing industry’s doesn’t—at least not anymore.”

 
Elgan goes on to describe the book industry as ‘unique’, and at their essence, ‘a publisher is above all an investor’. There are plenty of industry analysts, consultants, journalists, bloggers, self-published authors who were rejected at the gates of Eden or simply chose from the word go to give the established path to publishing the two fingers—happy that the publishing industry is broken and its funeral march is just around the corner.
 
I’m not sure I would go along with many naysayers in describing publishing as ‘broken’ or that the ‘whole process of discovering new talent is broken beyond repair’. Elgan seems to be specifically addressing the New York publishing establishment, and if there is one thing we have learned over the past ten years, it is that the publishing machine is made up of many complex parts, and right now, few of those parts are working well together. Publishing is not so much broken, it’s disassembling itself in a very public manner. In so doing, it’s showing itself to be a machine that has pretty much worked the same way for several hundred years.

Let us not forget that some of the oldest and most established publishing houses started out in the book industry as printers, where the production and publication of a book was much more of a co-operative effort between author and printer/publisher. For a printer, the quality is in the paper book as a physical product. For a publisher, the quality is the intellectual content of the paper book. The whole publishing machine was built on the foundation that the paper book was sacred. Digitalization in the publishing industry has for the first time challenged that core belief. This is a major sea-change for publishers—akin to the first explorers discovering that the earth was round and you wouldn’t fall off the edge if you pushed your boundaries of belief. So publishing at its core hasn’t really changed from its inception—and it’s hard not to understand an attitude of ‘if it’s not broken, don’t try to fix it’.

 

“Much like a Sand Hill Road venture capital firm, a publishing company plays kingmaker by discovering, guiding and, above all, investing in the right talent.


Sure, publishing companies employ brilliant book designers, editors and others who collaborate to produce high-quality products. But they don’t have a monopoly on those skills. Any author can hire great book designers, editors, printers, marketers and everyone else in the creative chain. What most authors can’t do is invest $150,000 to produce and market an untested book. Ultimately, the ability to invest — and the experience and wisdom to invest wisely — is the only uniquely valuable thing about publishers.”

 
In many ways, Elgan—certainly for me—is not describing modern publishing houses, and I think, in a roundabout way he acknowledges this. He is describing publishing as it was 30 to 40 years ago, when large publishers were still prepared to take a risk with a new author or unproven author—happy for a period of time to pass while they invested and worked with the author until they wrote ‘that book’ which broke them into a large market. It might take publishing two of the author’s books, or it might take five books. This approach rarely happens with large publishing houses now, certainly not without the active presence of a dedicated literary agent. The ‘business of cultivating, nurturing and funding’ may exist in Silicon Valley, but it does not exist inside the doors of large publishing houses. Those tasks were long pushed out to literary agents, and if the truth be known, many of those agents would probably say their time is far too restricted to spend cultivating and nurturing authors. Literary agents, like publishers, want a good marketable book as close to final publishable product as possible from the get-go.
 
Elgan describes the Broken Model as he sees it: (The bold is mine)
 

“Here’s how book publishing is supposed to work: Joe Author decides to write the Great American Novel. He bangs out a couple of chapters in his spare time, cobbles together a polished book proposal and goes hunting for a literary agent. Most real agents are maxed out with clients, but after six months of dedicated searching, he finds one, who then spends weeks or months shopping the proposal to major publishing houses.”

 
I’m not sure book publishing ever really did work quite that way. From my experience, no literary agent or publisher today would bother looking at a synopsis, three chapters and proposal submission for a novel unless they knew the book was actually completely finished by the author.
 

“The result of this disconnect in the talent discovery system is that the quality of books is declining fast.”

 
I agree with Elgan here, but, and it’s a big but, quality is entirely subjective. Someone is still buying those celebrity and template-driven books churned out by publishers.
 

“Browsing a bookstore is like picking through trash in a garbage dump looking for something of value.”


I’m not sure where Elgan is doing his browsing, but I’d suggest he try another store, perhaps some of the independents. Ultimately the retailers still hold a great degree of power over the publishers, and their buyers decide what goes on the shelves, but there is no doubt, certainly in the large retail chains, that inventory lists are shrinking fast, and it is only the sure-fire sellers that get premium space.

 

“And that’s why the industry is dying. The content is skewing toward trash. The public is becoming less enthusiastic about books not because they have other diversions but because books are becoming less exciting.”

 
I know the point Elgan is trying to make here, and I equally sense his passion as well as his frustration, but there are more books being read now than ever before – more books being published than ever before, but the combination in a recessional downturn, deep discounting, the ludicrous returns policy operating today in the publishing world doesn’t help matters, and ultimately, it has led to profit share being squeezed everywhere. Fundamentally, I disagree with his assertion that the public are becoming less excited by books – the real problem is going to be the acceptance of the fact that there will not be any significant growth in books as paper products anymore – it’s going to become a diminishing circle. The ‘diversions’ are actually the key itself to the future of publishing and the ability for publishers to identify and harness the mediums and platforms of those very diversions.

Remember, the book is no longer intrinsically a physical paper product. Its strength is now it’s rebirth as a piece of digital content – capable of dissemination into a multitude of delivered channels. Publishers need to acknowledge they are going to have to do what they did hundreds of years ago when they moved from being simply printing presses to being publishers. Now, the real adjustment and challenge is for them to alter their models of business and move from being publishers to providers of ‘content’ products – be that digitized or paper. To be fair to them – that’s a very big challenge.

 
The real question here when the dust settles is the core of Elgan’s concerns about ‘discovering talent’, and who the remit will lie with. Elgan pretty much answers the question when he says that if Silicon Valley worked the way publishing does, we would never have had Google, Facebook and Twitter. He is right. And there’s the answer. The single most fundamental reason books sell remains word of mouth – personal recommendation. Networking platforms are simply the modern road word of mouth has advanced to.
 
Here is how Mike Elgan believes publishing should work if it follows the nod from Silicon Valley:
 

“Every new author would forget about seeking an agent or an advance, and instead self-publish. This is what software and cloud-based start-ups do: They use their own money — and the inexpensive tools available — to build something on the cheap before they go asking for outside investment.


New services should emerge where authors could post links to their books, with samples, commentary and opportunities for reader reviews. A Digg-like voting system could surface the most popular titles.”

 
If you substitute the opening word of the above piece, ‘Every’ to ‘Many’, then you are pretty much describing things as they stand now. All of the above is happening and new as well as established authors are going directly to services like Lulu, CreateSpace and Lightning Source – cutting out much of the middle-men in between them and their readers. They are using publishing platforms and online communities like Smashwords, Wattpad, Fictionwise, Amazon Kindle, IndieReader, and many, many more.
 

“Meanwhile, authors would try to get meetings to pitch to the publishing companies. Agents, rather than reacting to authors beating down their doors, could instead act more like sports agents and go out and hunt for new talent using Web 2.0 tools and the Internet in general to find brilliant authors.”

 
I think the above piece reflects what most fundamentally needs to change in publishing – agents. As more and more authors reject the gate keeping policy adopted by the publishing industry, agents may decide to be happy with their lot and deal exclusively with established authors and lucrative deals. Alternatively, for the first time, they may actively seek the higher quality independent authors and work for them, or act as scouts for the larger publishing houses and independent publishers. We may quickly approach a time where there is no such thing as a midlist author. You are either a full time author earning a reasonable living with an established publishing house, or you are publishing independently and contracting services, be it agent, editor, designer or distributor.
 

“If authors get their own deal, they could use that fact to attract the best agent, whom they would need as a guide and as a negotiator of the contract.”

 
There is a mindset here Mike Elgan is inadvertently challenging. I’ve always believed that the publishing industry has a kind of attitude – almost a class structure – ‘this is the way it is and has always been done’. That has to change, whether publisher or agent, survival and earning a crust will always be the great leveller. Publishers will have to accept that just because there is more ‘self-published crap’ out there, flooding ‘their industry’, the books they publish should in that case stand head and shoulders above that ‘crap’. They are easily achieving that now, but in five years, independent authors may very well have the knowhow, platform and network to easily rival them. In a few notable cases, it is already happening now. Agents will have to accept, more and more, when they enter a contract with an author, it is the agent who is working for the author, and not the other way around.
 
Mike Elgan concludes his piece by presenting some suggestions as to what he believes publishers should do. I quoted a lot from his article because I happen to think it one of the most significant articles I have read on…well…if you like, the future of publishing. I think it is clear, I don’t agree with all Mike’s points and conclusions, (yes, I think advances should go, but I still believe in the basic fundamentals of established publishing houses, and the death knell is not sounding just yet.) though, Mike Elgan might prove me wrong if it all goes tumbling down.
 
Here is why I don’t think it will.
 
Many of the people operating small presses, author solutions services, independent publishers with new models of business, came from the belly of the beast itself. They got out, or were spat out, for a variety of reasons. Maybe some of them really were breezing it, and hadn’t a clue what they were doing from they off. But the fact is, there is a vast wealth of talent in the publishing industry. Some of them are starting to do it within the beast itself, and many others have kissed the beast goodbye and prefer to do it on their terms and their chosen model. What is clear to me is that no one model will win out. No one has it right or wrong. We are entering a time when a whole host of publishing models will suit the needs of author, publisher and reader alike.
 
Publishing is not broken by a long, long way, but the key is how we disassemble the components of the machine and reassemble it all back together without forgetting the core elements that make it work.

This is no longer a question of how publishing really works, but rather, how it now needs to work combining all the components of publishing, all that the established fraternity have learned and all the independent and self-published fraternity have learned. To believe that one doesn’t need the other and the two cannot exist under the one umbrella of the publishing industry, is to speak ignorance and write the words of your own publishing demise.

 
[This was a general free-flowing article and I have deliberately avoided few links, citations and references outside of Mike Eglan’s PC World article.] All quotes used are copyright of PC World.

 

This is a cross-posting from Mick Rooney’s POD, Self-Publishing and Independent Publishing.

Timing Is Everything

This phrase is common to many aspects of business, which includes book publishing and marketing. There is a definite set of cycles in the book publishing world of which you need to be aware. The timing of release dates is critical.

This phrase is common to many aspects of business, which includes book publishing and marketing. There is a definite set of cycles in the book publishing world of which you need to be aware. The timing of release dates is critical.

First, there is the copyright date listed on the copyright page. Many bookstores and librarians want the latest works. If you release your work during the last quarter of the calendar year, you would best be served by listing the copyright year as the following year. That gives you 15 months of exposure as a work for the next year and therefore the latest version. If you list the current year, you’re only getting 3 months of that exposure before you’re considered ancient history. That’s such a minor point you might say. You’d be very surprised.

The next big event in the industry is Book Expo America. This is a huge book marketing event of international proportions. Many major publishers time their releases for this late May event for that either advanced reading copies (ARCs), if not the actual books, are available to be given away and displayed at the show. Many book industry buyers go to this trade show specifically to see the latest offerings. Ordinarily following within a month of the BEA is the American Librarian Associations bi-annual trade show, although there have been rumors lately that these two trade shows may be combined.

The next important time frame is early fall when bookstores are making their final purchases for the upcoming holiday season, which is the busiest time of the year for bookstores. Tied to this are the regional bookseller associations’ trade shows in late September/early October. These are known as book buying shows, unlike the BEA, which can be too overwhelming in scope to provide much time for book ordering.

Finally, a relatively new event to consider is the American Booksellers Association’s Winter Institute held in January. Of all the yearly events, this is one that has increasingly become the most important for our bookstore. It’s a traveling show, held in a different city each year. It comprises three days of intense seminars, workshops, and dinner speeches filled with the latest information and techniques independent bookstores need to survive and thrive. There are large displays of ARCs free for the asking.

There are also sessions dedicated to publishers’ sales reps presenting their companies’ current and upcoming releases with info about targeted readerships, awards, and marketing aids. The audience is limited to 500 attendees and folks start reserving slots months in advance. This coming 2011 January Winter Institute (19-21 January) will be held at the Arlington, Virginia’s Crystal City Mariott, just down the road from the Pentagon. It is almost booked up already. Information about this, the BEA, and the regional trade shows can be found at http://bookweb.org for your information.

There you have the top American display and buying opportunities. In addition, there are other international trade shows such as London’s and Frankfurt, Germany’s that publishers either attend or pay to have the wares represented by various display companies. The primary purpose of these for publishers is foreign rights deals. In other words, there are major book events scattered throughout the year. This doesn’t count the many book fairs scattered around the country and throughout the year.

The important lesson from this article is choose an event and/or a buying cycle and focus on it for your release It used to be spring and fall were the only buying cycle milestones one need consider. That has changed, as you can see from this posting. There are many more marketing opportunities throughout the year these days; however, it’s better to be selective as to when your target retail market’s buy to most and structure your marketing plan around that. You authors also need to be aware of these cycles so you’ll know when it is best to approach agents/publishers with your book, especially if it’s seasonal in nature.

 

This is a reprint from Bob Spear’s Book Trends blog.

Improving Indie Author Events

This post, by Shane Solar-Doherty, originally appeared on The Things They Read on 10/27/10.

On Monday night I went to a reading at Lorem Ipsum Books, a local used shop, a business I get great pleasure out of supporting. They were hosting Lindsay Hunter and Christian TeBordo, two authors with debut story collections with Featherproof Books, an indie publisher out of Chicago. Featherproof sent Hunter and TeBordo out on a five-stop tour that they dubbed the Road Read tour. Their fourth stop was Lorem Ipsum.

Hunter and TeBordo picked funny and daring stories to read and delivered them well. Their stories were very short, and they were read quickly, which the pace of the stories called for. But the reading only lasted about ten minutes, or to measure it another way, approximately one minute for each audience member in attendance. The audience and the authors were crammed into chairs and stools in a corner of the store. And there was no discussion to wrap things up, the part of a reading that I look forward to the most. In the end, I felt lead on, like I was supposed to anticipate what was to come next. And that’s a quality I admire at the end of a well-written story. It’s not what I expect at the end of a reading.

It reminded me of another reading I attended recently, when HTMLGIANT hosted Grace Krilanovich in a streamed live video to read from her novel, The Orange Eats Creeps, the book that got Krilanovich selected for the National Book Foundation’s 5 Under 35 award. The format of the reading seemed like it had Krilanovich confused. The new format, which I do believe will be effective after it’s been trialed further, would have baffled me as well; read into a lens, not to an audience. Krilanovich slowly settled into reading to a webcam. And then, when she finally seemed to be getting comfortable, the video went out. And then the audio.

It was out for maybe a minute, maybe two, and then it came back, and Krilanovich, clearly flustered, had to collect herself, pick up where she left off in the story, and work back up to that comfort level of reading to an invisible audience. Once she did, the video and audio went out again. This occurred about five times throughout her reading. At another point, a cat walked across her desk while she read. At the end, questions were slow to filter in, and Krilanovich was stuck in a virtual world with no real way to gauge her audience’s reaction to the reading.

 

Read the rest of the post on The Things They Read.